Jun stepped forward to put the hat on him, adjusting it to perfection.
“There,” Jun said, stepping back with his head tilted. “You don’t really have to fold the brim up, you know.”
“I don’t?” Sho asked, truly not knowing that.
Jun smiled, giving him a soft peck on the lips, one that sent his heart pounding. “Have a safe trip.”
Sho could only nod as Jun sported a triumphant grin on his face before walking away.
AHHHHHHHHHHHH YOU SPOILED ME SO MUCH WITH THIS KIND OF SWEETNESS AHHHHHHHH. (as you probably have noticed, I’ve been completely reduced to keyboard mash and dumb and loud ohs-and-ahs squeals from this point on, hahahaha)
And the ultimate scene—yeah I’ve been calling the scene that way for weeks now, alsdkjasldk. Guilt is a powerful reason, I cannot agree more but Jun made it so much more interesting and scorching hot, I’m burnt all over unffff.
Spanking omgggg. And not just spanking, you pretty much gave me the whole spread of awesome. Of open palm spank! Of backhand slap! Of kneading that perky bottom!!!! Of raking nails on redden skin!!!! asdlkjaslkd, this whole scene is killing me and I’d be willing to die for this kind of epic greatness. Ahhhhh. Glorious. PLUS A+ ON THE MAKESHIFT GAG YESS! AND THEN WALL SEX. ALL THE EMOTION! OMG. THE PREP IS SO HOT. SHO NOW YOUR SUBMISSIVENESS IS SHOWING. JUN I LOVE HOW DOMINANT AND ENABLING YOU ARE. I LOVE THAT THEY ARE PLAYFUL, AND WILLING, AND JUST GO ALL OUT ON EVERYTHING.
AND JUN KEPT THE SPANK ALL THROUGHOUT. AND STILL, SHO IS ASKING FOR MORE. /I’m so dead from all this, you can’t even. This is definitely the most detailed and most blazing hot wall sex I've ever read and thank you for that omg ❤!
(And I didn’t forget to turn off my caps lock above, I deliberately left it on because all of this epic needs to be in caps lock so you can hear this as me shouting my love for this scene on the top of my lungs YESSSS.)
And, are you trying to write the whole thing from my kink list? Because I think you are. WHAT? YES! I am just going to cherish this fic forever because super fucking hot wall sex with Jun spanking Sho. THIS WHOLE THING IS ENGRAVED SAFELY INTO MY MIND! THANK YOU! I cannot unsee it now, fucking glorious! There goes my ability to form a coherent sentence. Gone is coherence! I hope that was your intention, because if so, you have succeeded in doing so, and then some and beyond. Congratulation, you ❤️!
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I love the transition back to real life. Even with the attraction and hot sex not forgotten, I love that they take the time to go back to Tokyo together—slowly paced and sweetly done because hand holding and stealing kisses yesss! I also love that they smoothly return to their normal routine. AND THAT THEY ARE ACTING LIKE TEENAGERS IN LOVE and I was like, just call him already, man, you two! Such a perfect Sakumoto detail that made me (or us) pulling our hair together because they have one job! Please.
And Aimiya has to run another interference. These two are just helpless heap of gorgeous, seriously! And it has to take place in Keikarou. Awwww, all the way to Chiba. Nice move, Aiba! And nice glimpse of the Aiba’s side of story, because we’ve seen so much of Nino in Nagano and now Aiba in Chiba. AHHH YES! The meeting is such endearingly eye-rolling. Sho, you dork, with the phone conversation. AND JUN IS NOT ANY BETTER. I love that you write these two being so good to each other, after all their experience and everything.
I also truly love the necessary separation they have to endure before settling into (a happy) ending. And what a good metaphor at the end with the drive setting! They are now heading to a new chapter and have re-established their trust. And now ready to go anywhere, to a brand new story. I love this. I love “Anywhere” with Sho on the steering wheel and him asking Jun’s wish. At the end Jun gives the decision back to Sho. Call me fluff and romantic, but that is a very poetic ending. I truly love this ❤️.
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je_united on February 17th, 2016 at 07:26 pm